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Hotel Guinevere
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Hotel Guinevere I Black velveteen - Cascades of shadows. An appearance at the door. Such a world to explore. The strange land of my mind... Comes alive. All you are... Is a precipice of silence. Enjoining to my... Mountainous stance. Spirals of days (+) nights... Adjacent. Have arrived... Here - To this moment. Where space (+) time will take us - Who can say - In my... Expanding focus. I just know - You look like a witchy woman tonight. In that... Clothing of midnight. And I... Need you to cast a spell on me. Or continue the spell... So witchily. As the candlelight of the room Lies in your eyes... Sublime. Like pyres (+) fires In the centers of stone henges. All I see is desires As your rolling imagination unhinges. II Your body heat... Is a radiant cosmology. Interactive... Like time lapsed photography. I become a texture... A velveteen mixture. Scintillating. Undiscovered nerve endings I discover. And you... You connect to me in a black supernova. And I... Absorb the fragments that fall all over My bedroom... Formerly a gulf of darkness. Opens into a black velveteen of the iris of Isis. I don't know what Heaven is But it must shorely be something like this. I don't know what to say... So I just... Admire your way (+) give you my trust And give over - To the dark river Of love become lust. *. *. * Audio at... LINKTR.EE/UPSIDEDOWNSKY *. *. *
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You have such a wonderful way with words that immerses the reader into your world. The images you convey and the senses you include take us on that journey with you. I especially appreciate the way you use rhyme and consonance within certain phrases like . . . "a precipice of silence" and "I become a texture... A velveteen mixture." So much expression. You have a gift. Thanks for sharing it with us here.
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Your writing is distinctive. I'd know it is you with your use of symbols, and your words. Your words paint pictures, but also let my mind contribute to what is seen. The words are so pleasing to the ear (and mind). I talk about rhyme and meter sometimes, and I know they can make poems have more of an impact. This is lovely and subtle. Thank you for sharing yourself.
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Indeed... *. *. *
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That is a very kind compliment, Joy... Thank you. *. *. *
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You have such a wonderful way with words that immerses the reader into your world. The images you convey and the senses you include take us on that journey with you. I especially appreciate the way you use rhyme and consonance within certain phrases like . . . "a precipice of silence" and "I become a texture... A velveteen mixture." So much expression. You have a gift. Thanks for sharing it with us here. (*. *. *) *. *. *
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Your writing is distinctive. I'd know it is you with your use of symbols, and your words. Your words paint pictures, but also let my mind contribute to what is seen. The words are so pleasing to the ear (and mind). I talk about rhyme and meter sometimes, and I know they can make poems have more of an impact. This is lovely and subtle. Thank you for sharing yourself. I am greatly humbled by your very kind words... Thank you S... *. *. *
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5/18/2021 5:37 pm |
Through her, you created a beautiful , sensual, a godess!
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Through her, you created a beautiful , sensual, a godess! I do so love a godess... They are certainly very rare... but they are windows or gateways or portals or stargates.... *. *. *
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I think this is a picture of my imagined cyber lover. She doesn't quite look real, but real enough for her to be on the right side of my Uncanny Valley. Can you please arrange for her to come round my house and ask for a bunk-up?
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She is now signing up for a gold membership and will be contacting you forthwith. *. *. *
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